Original:
The purposes of the Association are:
- To promote and further higher education.
- To foster and encourage the organization and activities of branches and other alumni groups.
Proposed
The purposes of the Association are:
- An engaging and mutually beneficial lifetime link between Simon Fraser University and its community of alumni.
Firstly the proposed version doesn't make grammatical sense. Secondly, why the damn narcissism? Me, me, me, benefit ME! I thought education is supposed to make us better people.
Anyone wants to show up and vote NO with me :)?
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